26 thoughts on “Poppy 5-7-5

  1. What children witness sometimes is heart-wrenching///how many of them find solace in doll houses, forts, beneath blankets, etc. This piece leave a pang in the heart for all those who have to experience this. Powerfully written, my friend!

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  2. The title is excellent. I love the name you chose, for like a blood red blossom, I can imagine the wounds in the mind and heart of the child. The dollhouse antithesis with what is happening in the house is very well detailed.
    It is strange, for I have been listening to the song “My name is Luka” by Suzanne Vega for the past days.

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