I start at the sound of each car passing
on midnight streets outside;
hoping it’s you,
knowing it isn’t.
Dreams fade with your warmth
as reality slowly intrudes:
it would be enough
to fall into your arms
and know I’d wake there, too.
I am only real
when you are near,
but you never stay
and the grey morning is close
and mine alone.
Ryan Stone
‘I am only real
when you are near’ love this most.
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Thankyou so much. That is actually the line that the whole poem grew around 🙂
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Me too. That line speaks of a profound love
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Thank you, Melinda 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Gosh beautiful!
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Gosh, thanks 😉
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This is fantastic; love it.
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Thank you. I just visited A Walk on the Bright Side and had the same reaction 🙂
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So glad I stumbled across your blog. Love your work and look forward to reading more of your posts. 🙂
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I like it from the very beginning, how you drive your feelings near to the reader… how you surprise from line to line…
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And it’s all worthwhile to get feedback like that! Thank you 🙂
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This is so intensely vulnerable, I feel that the words are conceived by tears of longing .
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Thank you once again, Trini. I really appreciate your kind feedback.
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“As reality slowly intrudes” so good- I love this
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Thank you – i’m happy I could return some of the pleasure I get from my forays into your site. It’s amazing 🙂
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Wow- thank you so much Ryan :))
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You describe longing so well. Whether it is sleep or daydream, there is always that tugging shape within, aching to be filled by that certain someone, that does not stay to complete the puzzle.
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Damn you’re good – you just described a big chunk of my life
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wishing you a one piece, completes all 😉
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This is so powerful, Ryan, the yearning for someone that is out of reach.
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Strong emotions from days long gone… Thank you for being so kind, Judy 🙂
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I think it is something most of us can relate to at one time or another Ryan. I thought it was very poignant. 🙂
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