39 thoughts on “Cheat 5-7-5

  1. Oh no.. this packed a teary punch! Never trust those “honeyed lips”, they may spill what’s not enough.
    I like the way how you swirl the reader’s feeling in just three lines.

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  2. The shrill in your voice
    should have warned me about the
    quake in your intent

    P.S. I love your 5-7-5s, whether angry or sad or romantic, they all have passionate overtones. The fire in you comes out strong.

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  3. I kept singing ‘oh, oh here she comes…she’s a man eater’ while reading this. As sweet as those lips are, it is hard to hide such betrayal. A powerful write, my friend.

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