Mortal 5-7-5

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Written for National Poetry Month 2016 @ The Music In It – Peace of Mind.

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16 thoughts on “Mortal 5-7-5

  1. Love this, Ryan (and I’m truly sorry about your dad…)–I ponder sometimes, what it will be like in Heaven where there is no more crying. I assume that means we don’t pack our bad/painful memories with us, so the reunions won’t be bitter or fearful.

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  2. Such sadness expressed with pristine beauty. An eager sting that burns constantly has found its way once again on your lines. I like your repetition with different meaning of the other life – both lives different and times too.
    Sending you smiles my friend.

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