Hatred consumes
It billows, it fumes
Filling space with vile thoughts
Bred from desire to destroy
Brewed from a heartless ploy
To conquer what is not yours
From tribal gatherings
To spaceship armies
In the vastness of times embrace
Fists throwing rocks
To detonators set to digital clocks
Killing is now easier when miles apart
Regardless, what color of flesh
Hate, Reflected
Always looks the same
When war paint applied to camouflage
While you were flying high
I watched a brother die
Crying for a son
He’ll never know
Console zombies
on your couches
Squander precious days
Pretend that war’s a game
And you’re the kind of hero
Who could dive
Into a hard man’s eyes,
Unflinching,
Take a life
A parade down the highway
Bridges lined with ribbons and flowers
Signs that say Thank You and God Bless
A welling tear as the families car appears
The saddest sedan rolling the asphalt
6 o’clock news, covering the story
Of a soldier, home to deaths glory
Passing like the wind
Onlookers wave with forced grins
A tragedy, this war
That brings no joy
A 21 gun salute
Fades to a commercial break
My urban battlefield
Of rain-strafed streets
Is stained a dismal shade
of homeless
Where silent tears meet
Homecoming cheers
And thunderclaps
Cause panic
Abandoned behind
Friendly lines
My platoon fall one by one
Weeping toy soldiers
Who realize
Wars are never won
– Written by Ax and Stone
(Photo credit: google images, Layout: Ax)
We send our brave servicewomen and men out into darkness to protect our families and our way of life and when they return, having stared too long into the abyss, we fail to care for them as they have cared for us. In a time when we lose more of these heroic souls on home soil by their own hand than in combat, the shame is ours to bear.
I’d like to thank the incredibly talented Ax from Perso~in~Poesia for this opportunity to meld our two different writing styles into a poem that is very close to my heart. I’ve followed and enjoyed his passionate words for a long time now and it was truly an honour to write with him. As I’ve said before, I’m a nightmare to write with, but Ax made the experience most enjoyable. If you haven’t had the pleasure of reading him yet, please head over to Perso~in~Poesia and brace yourself for one exhilarating ride.
Outstanding. You two are quite the duo and I am not surprised by the results. This is a very moving piece, friends.
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Thank you, Belinda. Ax was a star to write with. I hope you’ve been well, my friend 🙂
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You’re welcome. 🙂 Thank you.
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Fantastic. So great to see you two combine your talents. Well written and poignant! ❤
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Thanks, Em. Welcome home 🙂
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Thanks, Ryan! Sad to leave but happy to be back. And funny…seems like I will always have a home here amongst my WordPress friends, wherever I may travel.
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Extremely well written and creative. Great job both of you.
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Thanks so much, Mandi 🙂
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Amazingly well done, gents!
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Thank you, Kunal 🙂
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outstanding guys! Your collaboration is perfect and it tugs on the heart’s strings, playing a a painful melody. This is an issue close to my heart too. I’ve tried to get involve to help but it didn’t work out. They wanted the one thing I didn’t have–lots of money. All I could offer was time.
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Brother Stone! Fucking A. Turned out so great. and you’re a dick for saying all those nice things about me. Ya made me choke!! Lol. Thank you, the honor was all mine to write with you. To the next…. 🙏➰❤️
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Haha, gold!
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I’ll reblog after midnight so it goes into my tomorrow’s date.
Thanks again Ryan, you’re an amazing poet.
Have to fix the photo credit.
Taken from google images, all I did was lay the text down. Wish I knew where that statute rests. Couldn’t find any reference. Maybe someone will spot it and comment.
Cheers brotha from down-unda 😜
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It’s the Suffolk Regiment Boer War Memorial in Ipswich
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Antony You are always so humble ❤
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I f***ing love this! Two of my faves collaborating!! Yah!! ❤️
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We f***ing appreciate it! Thank you, Jen. It was lotsa fun 😉
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Haha ☺️ well that’s f****ing great!
We should collaborate one day!
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As long as you promise to be gentle 😉
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I can’t make any promises hehe ☺️
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(I had written this during the Kosovo war, killing of the innocent made no sense to me, and it never will.)
Shot him and watched him fall,
his life slowly fading away,
wondered what was in his mind,
wondered about his name;
A stranger who’s got a home,
a wife and a child,
waiting for him then,
waiting now endlessly;
A medal I got for being “brave”,
their ambitious dream fulfilled,
worth of the medal now I doubt,
the guilt being just too heavy;
Only if the medal could:
stop me from lamenting,
and console the grieving family,
of the soldier I ruthlessly killed;
But the medal, cold and lifeless,
only brings haunting memories,
of the fallen soldier,
defending his land bravely;
Wonder when we’ll realize,
a soldier “good” is brave,
not a toy soldier,
a pawn in the selfish game.
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A powerful poem that you friend wrote.Nadita, were you too involved with UN during the Bosnian and Kosovo wars?
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Oh no no. I wasn’t!
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Ah, now it makes sense. I was trying to recall if I had seen you in any of our meetings, but could not recall your face.
Please have a lovely evening. 🙂
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Lol. You too 🙂
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Oops forgot to mention, a very dear friend wrote this and sent to me. Wanted to share with you guys. Ax, see this mio caro. ❤
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Wow!!!
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This was stunning…
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Thank you 🙂
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My pleasure. Smiles.
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Beautifully sad tribute to our military, wonderful job you two!
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Thank you so much, Holly. So happy you dropped by 🙂
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My pleasure Ryan! 🙂
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Amazing. Absolutely brilliant. You and Antony make beautiful words together. You both have my admiration. 🙂
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Thank you kindly, dear Carisa. So lovely to hear from you. Your thoughts and kindness are appreciated as always 🙂
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Always so kind! You’re a gem ❤
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You two – whoa! Holy shit! Seamless, two minds melding into one.
This stanza in particular:
“Console zombies
on your couches
Squander precious days
Pretend that war’s a game”
speaks volumes as to the youth who have no clue about war, and how men (and women) have suffered/are still suffering.
“Onlookers wave with forced grins
A tragedy, this war
That brings no joy
A 21 gun salute
Fades to a commercial break”
Barely a passing thought for most.
Damn. You guys blew it out of the water. Bravo.
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Wow! Lovely, thoughtful feedback thank you Elizabeth. I really appreciate the time you’ve taken to share such nice thoughts – it means the world 🙂
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You guys just love to blow me away. My pleasure to read you (and Ax), I’m so happy to have found your blog Ryan. You rock. ❤
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Likewise, Elizabeth. And thank you 🙂
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Ryan and Antony, congratulations on a wonderful collaboration, addressing a difficult topic with grace and beauty. Terrific poem my friends. ~ Mia
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Thank you for your lovely comments, Mia. Ax was great to write with 🙂
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You’re welcome. A delight to read something written by the both of you. 🙂
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What treat for our eyes brought by two wonderful poets. You both brought to light a wonderful creation through your talents. Bravo!
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Thank you very much, Miss Skittles 🙂
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This is amazing! Yes, I’ve read and posted about the loss of life on home soil by those who have given all for our freedom. Thank you for bringing more to this sad fact. Great piece!
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Thank you, Tiffany – your visit and thoughtful feedback are greatly appreciated:)
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You’re welcome!
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Hello Ryan, wonderful collaboration. Very well written indeed.
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Thank you so much, Staci. Ax was very cool to write with.
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Oh I’m sure. I did a collaborative poem with a wonderful french poet once, and it turned out great. I also collaborated with a Brazilian poet, which was even more challenging because it was bilingual, but it really turned out awesome. I was surprised.
Bravo to the both of you.
🙂
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