Pierced by a willow spear, the marshmallow blisters; bemoans
its heated rush towards metamorphosis. A Phoenix, unborn,
the pink skin ruptures, sloughs off to flare briefly; returns
to the ashen dreams of a ghost gum. Freedom dies
with your smile and I find myself colder; wishing to stand beside you.
Always. But that would betray wings as yet unfurled.
Overhead, the cross hangs low. Four nimbus globes dance below,
across a lady’s mercurial skin. Your hand withdraws to discover
a soft mallow heart, licked by the inner flame. Released.
Framed in that introspective light I see you hurtling forward,
a stellar memory of lost radiance and I wish to tell you:
it’s the novas that define us.
– Ryan Stone
The first seven lines of this poem might just be the best lines I have read of yours so far! They are absolutely stunning and pull off the metaphor flawlessly!!!! π
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In fact… Forget “they might just be”… I’ve made up my mind. They are the best! π I keep reading that part over and over. It’s seriously amazing!
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Thank you for your support and all the nice feedback, Yusra. You are wonderful π
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Wow, this one is breath-taking. Such vivid imagery and heartfelt emotion.
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I love that you create a whole world of emotion from the beginnings of such a small spark, this is heartfelt writing π
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Thanks, Ginni. This is actually a really personal poem and one of my favorites. So good to hear you liked it π
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Ohh Ryan.. you wrote your soul in these verses. Yes, those novas super or not, bring us closer to introspect and knowledge of who we are.
Brought me to tears.. Hugs to you!!!!
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Ah, you understand me so completely. Thank you so much – this one is about as personal as I’ve written but probably a bit too obscure for most. Love that you get it π
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I did not want to say much so I would not spoil it for the others.. but hugs are with you always π
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Please don’t be shy – I look forward to every comment you leave me π
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awwww.. so do I!! ^_^
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Ryan, my perceptive button is buzzing and shaking vigorously. But i better turn it off, yeah? π
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Haha, speak your mind, dear Nandita π
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Sweet piece of written work!
chris
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Thanks so much, Chris. Greatly appreciated π
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Ryan, perhaps itβs the unspoken and internal nova that truly defines us. Stunning writing as always my friend. I hope that you had a terrific weekend camping. Please enjoy your week. ~ Mia
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A very good observation, Mia. Thank you for leaving such beautiful feedback. Camping was excellent thank you – I love being outside with my boys. I hope your week is wonderful, too. Have fun π
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You’re welcome Ryan. So happy to hear that you had an excellent time camping. Thank you the weekend has been wonderful. π
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I won’t pretend to understand it, clearly it’s personal–the imagery is stellar and haunting.
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Haha, is that code for ‘too obscure’?! No probs – it is extremely personal and (as I thought when I wrote it) most likely too obscure. It came about as my introspective nature took my mind on a journey pondering my relationship with my young son and how it would change and grow over time…
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You write beautifully, whether or not I glean the full meaning π
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I love everything about this, especially the last line, “It’s the novas that define us.” It’s given me much to think about. – Lola
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Hi, Lola. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave me such lovely thoughts. It’s quite a personal poem and I was worried maybe a bit obscure. I really appreciate your kindness π
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This is just beautiful. So beautiful. I actually found it very refreshing. Had me thinking for a while, even after the words disappeared from the screen. It was touching. You’re a very gifted writer.
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Thank you so much! What lovely feedback to wake up to. So nice of you to take the time to leave your thoughts π
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So, Ajay and I were talking one day about how your poems get a bit abstract and totally leave us “mind-blown and bewildered”. This is definitely one of them. (It’s not a bad thing!) This poem is so deep and beautifully heavy that it’s refreshing to read! Actually, really refreshing to read. You don’t know how many terrible poems I’ve had to read and edit this week. π Your style is always breathtaking.
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Haha-I’m obscure you mean?! Lol. Thank you for your lovely words, Al. You know how special you are to me and your feedback means the world π
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Haha a good obscure-I swear! :]
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