He spits into the busker’s case,
laughing with his mates.
‘Get a job, old man,’ he taunts.
The busker doesn’t slow.
‘You deaf?’ he asks, to no response;
losing interest, saunters off.
Not deaf, the busker strums his tune,
his mind on days long gone;
a foreign shore, machine-gun fire,
brothers stolen
by crimson waves.
Ryan Stone
Is that like a D-Day landing craft? And just plain curious – is this a personal piece?
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Yes it is and no it isn’t π
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great ending! really like the flow of this piece π
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Thank you so much, Neha π
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Stunning piece Ryan. The music drowning the memories.
“Buscar” meaning “to look for” – what is this man looking for? maybe peace, maybe nostalgia is hard to bear without sounds.. I can almost hear his music filling the void in his heart.
Enjoy your week ahead!
β€ D.
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Thank you, Dajena. Wonderful thoughts, as always. I think perhaps he stopped looking forwards a long time ago and only knows how to look back… I hope your week is wonderful, too π
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Wow! π
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Thank you! Great response π
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Welcome! π
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A sad tale of our times, Ryan, beautifully written π
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Thank you, Judy. Lovely feedback. I hope you’re well π
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I enjoyed it, Ryan, I am well thanks, and I hope that everything is going well for you too π
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Wonderful news. Yep-life is magic, thanks π
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Beautiful, Ryan, as usual. Dajena, a “busker” in urban argot is someone who plays in the street for coins. But I love your definition. The double meaning in the context of the poem is quite perfect.
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Thank you, Sarah. I had the same thoughts about buscar- the meaning is perfect for this π
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i loved this ryan. those who spit in his case have no idea what he has seen or where he has been. their action means nothing to him in the scheme of things, only serves as a reminder of the what led to war in the first place – misunderstanding, fear, and a grab for one man’s need to have power over another.
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Nice one, Beth – you read my meaning exactly. Thank you for your kindness π
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Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow! There’s much more truth in this poem than not–so many homeless vets on our streets here, unable to work for many reasons…and they’ve lost their sense of themselves, their worth–because morons don’t respect them. My heart breaks. Fab poem, Ryan.
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Thank you, Stella. A subject close to my heart.
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Me too π¦ I just want to tear my hair out, that we send people off to war, and IF they come home, it’s like, “well, do the best you can”. Surely we owe them far better (screaming quietly)!
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A timely and beautiful tribute to our service men Ryan.
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Thank you so much, it really makes me sad.
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It makes me sad and angry, we are not doing right by our service men and women and their families, many who have returned permanently maimed and those who gave their all. Thank you for the reminder Ryan.
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Our society is in a very bad way… Thank you, Holly π
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