In my father’s field
my fledgling hopes are neatly hedged,
sown in the soil of silent forebears.
Beside a bourne, in chalk and flint,
I plant my dreams deep.
The rasping of his shovel has slowed
this season. Some furrows lie shallow,
others run deeper.
Through rustic panes I watch him bend,
straining against the pull of years
to pluck joy from the loam.
A moment’s pause to contemplate
a lone invader into precise ranks,
before his shovel resumes its dirge.
Discarding my pen, I fall in beside–
a forgotten page, unplowed.
Ryan Stone
First published on The Houseboat in August, 2015
Love the imagery in this.
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Thank you, Shirley 🙂
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so beautiful. love the loan peony and the image of the father plowing the fields of hope, the little flash of reluctance maybe showing he doesn’t entirely want to break his sons (and his own) dreams, but feels he has no other choice, doesn’t acknowledge the son’s lifestyle as a reputable one, had his own dreams crushed by his own father and the resentment drives him to do this to his own son. and great image down at the bottom, really like the colors and composition.
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Wow, you’re good – it’s so rewarding to know that the meaning came through so well. Thank you Mila, that is a great start to my day 🙂
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it’s a great piece! also, to my previous comment, *lone, not loan…yikes
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Beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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The wit is ravishing! Absolutely love the tucked in alliterations, and the play on words. A poem which holds credentials of its own!
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Thank you, Dajena 🙂
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Stunning!
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Thank you so much! I’m just exploring your site and having a similar reaction 🙂
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Oh dear, I’m not worthy. I found you via Antony who recommended your site and I’ve just been reading your work with a gaping mouth – just… fantastic!
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*blushing* – far too kind, but thank you so much 🙂
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Wow. I adore this poem. Reminds me of Bradbury’s short story “The Scythe” in it’s imagery. Your words and site are beautiful.
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Hi, Ashley! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave such thoughtful feedback – truly appreciated 🙂
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So much imagery and depth in this Ryan. Loved it.
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Hiya, Miriam. Thank you so much 🙂
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I absolutely LOVE this one.
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Too kind, dear Al. But thank you 🙂
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