I’m not an iceblock. I’m not a teardrop,
mooching around your Long Island Iced Tea.
I’m not chasing dreams, dreaming of Jeannie;
I’m not slowing for one more whistle stop.
I’ve never bridged sighs, I don’t island hop;
I’ve not tasted the free airs of Heaney,
nor held a heart that, like some Houdini,
didn’t vanish with a barbaric yawp.
I have set no flame within love’s hearth
that didn’t burn that shantytown down.
At night, I am king; come morning, uncrowned-
I walk in as Luke, am forced out as Darth.
Rivers are rivers, regardless of flow:
O, stone, be not so; O, stone, be not so.
Ryan Stone
Loooooove the beautiful art work β€
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Thank you, Trini. Big smiles to you, my friend π
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And to you! π
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“Never bridged sighs”… oh wow.. sigh!
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Haha, thank you π
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“I have set no flame in a lover’s hearth that didn’t burn the whole shantytown down…” <— The best part for me. Fantastic image π
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Ooo, and the palidrome part was genius as well! π
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I am amazed by how you came up with it! Also, I’m so sorry for the multiple comments… I have a bad habit of excitedly pressing ‘enter’ before I’m done π
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Multiple comments are fine, Yusra – that’s how my mind works, too (besides, it makes me look much more popular!). Thanks for all your nice thoughts. Ive never played much with form but I’m having fun. I hope you’re well, thank you for dropping by π
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Every time I think I’ve found my favorite poem of yours, you post something better.
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Thanks so much, mate – feedback doesn’t get any better than that! The WSS has been an amazing place for motivation and inspiration.
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fantastic!! artistry in fact and through your words…beautiful β€ I can't even do stick people lol
xx Paris
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Thank you, Paris. I hope you enjoyed your visit π
So nice to have you back.
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I did β€οΈ I feel wonderful today and it’s so nice to be back xx Paris
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After reading your ‘Whistle Stop’ this one shows the free one like wind who has little need for that bunch of roses. A warring soul, I suppose. To be honest, I don’t know the details of Star Wars, but I am aware that Luke and Darth are related, and perhaps trying to become whole. Great poems.
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate the time you’ve put into reading and commenting, it means the world π
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Wow!
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Thank you π
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My pleasure to read such amazing work.
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Ryan, my dear dear friend. What do I say this time? How do I praise thee? Too many things to say (about this piece), not enough syllables to utter those. I’ll just say you took my breath away.
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Nothing more is needed, dear Nandita – that is the nicest of compliments. Thank you, my friend π
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From the beginning , “I’m not an iceblock, I’m not a teardrop”, to the end, you had me enthralled, amazing words…
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And amazing feedback! Thank you so much, Ivor – your kindness is truly appreciated. π
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A beautifully complex piece weaved delicately with wonderful allusions. It felt like I was on a train watching I Dream of Jeanie while reading Seamus Heaney’s ‘The Walk’ ( I love Heaney’s work and still read him. I actually had an opportunity to hear him read and lecture at a university one time when I was studying Irish poetry. My favourite of his is ‘Digging’, of course, where he likens his pen to his father’s plough). I also love your use of juxtaposition, especially in the opening lines, offering contrast between the ice and tear, both human moods and both properties of water. And, I have to say that even though a stone may settle to the bottom of a flowing river, it does roll and smooth itself against other stones, constantly changing in shape and size until it is but a grain of sand. Ryan, my new friend, your artistry knows no limits. It’s so good to read and view your work.
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What wonderful feedback to start my day with! I’m flattered, humbled and so appreciative of you thoughtful comments. Ah, to have heard Heaney read – I’m incredibly jealous of that one. Yes, Digging is one of my first memories of being captured by a poem. Along with Slessor’s “Five Bells” and a heap by Maya Angelou. Thank you so much for the time you’ve invested in your reply, you’ve made my day π
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You are most welcome, Ryan! Heaney was so inspiring and I love Angelou – such a heart and such a genuine human being. She is missed. I love your work and what it speaks to me. Cheers, mate π
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Truly wonderful! From beginning to end your words are captivating π
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Thank you for your kindness once again π
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Youβre welcome π
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Finding out who we are, through the endless discoveries of the self we are making, until we find, every missing piece, then we would be, whole.
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gorgeous writing! dripping with emotion. love it β€
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Thanks so much, ren π
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