Rhyme of the Kingdom

Over the mountains
and down to the sea,
you must come now
if you hope to break free.
No time to mourn
for Autumn’s red bowers;
the light we once made,
now darkness devours.

I can play you
the rhymes of the kingdom,
I can sing you
the songs that you know;
but we must take wing
from this darkened halo –
we must take wing
for a devil wind blows.

Break from your prison
of urban malaise;
run to the ocean,
fly from your home.
I offer no promise
that we’ll make it –
but take my hand
and I’ll never let go.

Ryan Stone

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  1. This is so beautiful Ryan. I love the promise in this one. Love is a verb, not just a noun. And you have so gorgeously reminded us of the cindtabt decision to love the one we have chosen, although sometimes it becomes difficult to love.

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  2. Oh, here comes that other side of Ryan!
    Beautiful kingdom promised. There were so many images in my head as I read this. Atlantis, the end of seasons, the idea of departing from light into darkness of cessation. It also made me think of the myth of Persephone’s love and abduction.
    I can hear the wind echo. Gorgeous work Mr. Stone!

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  3. Ryan, “Rhyme of the Kingdom” didn’t just roll onto the paper, it’s apparent a lot of thought and consideration went into each word. You’ve created so many stunning images and analogies. I really like the idea of the narrator making a promise to never “let go”, regardless of the challenges ahead. So many amazing and suggestive visuals penned, heaven and hell, light and dark, wings and halos. Wonderful use of the phrase “urban malaise”, which for me acts as a bridge connecting the beautiful storytelling with reality, bringing about the idea of going back home, “the light we once made”, taking the chance/opportunity to find the way, tackling hurdles, but most of all to just give it a go. Beautiful poem, lovely rhythm and flow, the writing is superb! Please have a wonderful day. ~ Mia

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    1. Mia, it is the nicest of compliments to receive feedback on this level, from someone who has invested the time and thought to read, ponder and understand my writing so deeply. I am so grateful, truly flattered and incredibly happy that you were able to connect with so many elements. You’ve blown me away. Thank you doesn’t even cut it.

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    1. Joci!!!

      I’m so happy to see you back. I visited your site the other day and saw you’d been a little quiet. I hope you’ve been well. Thank you for dropping by and for your feedback 🙂

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    1. Aww this made me so nostalgic. Second time im reading this and my heart still goes plop!! Falling hard here in this one, Ryan. So glad you reposted.

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