Over the mountains
and down to the sea,
you must come now
if you hope to break free.
No time to mourn
for Autumn’s red bowers;
the light we once made,
now darkness devours.
I can play you
the rhymes of the kingdom,
I can sing you
the songs that you know;
but we must take wing
from this darkened halo –
we must take wing
for a devil wind blows.
Break from your prison
of urban malaise;
run to the ocean,
fly from your home.
I offer no promise
that we’ll make it –
but take my hand
and I’ll never let go.
– Ryan Stone
This is so beautiful Ryan. I love the promise in this one. Love is a verb, not just a noun. And you have so gorgeously reminded us of the cindtabt decision to love the one we have chosen, although sometimes it becomes difficult to love.
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‘Love is a verb’ – perfectly said, Manan. And thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, my friend 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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*constant decision. Damn the typo
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Okay I’m ready to go. When do we leave on this journey you described so poetically? 🙂
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No time like the present 🙂 Thank you, Melinda. I really do appreciate your friendship and support.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Ohhh, I am clutching my heart, reading this! And valise in hand, I’m going to trip Melinda to get there first 🙂
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Haha, the race is on! Thank you so much, as always, my friend 🙂
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Great fun! You’re most welcome 🙂
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What to say that hasn’t been said. I love the vulnerability and trust in this line, “but take my hand and I’ll never let go.” As always, incredible post.
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Something a bit different. I was mucking around with it on my guitar but it was a bit weird for a song 😉 Thanks, Belinda 🙂
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I still have to hear you play guitar. I haven’t explored that yet on your blog, if there is anything posted that is. You’re most welcome. 🙂
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Haha – I don’t know that heavy metal and poetry mix overly well…plus, my singing voice is even worse than my poetry-reading voice 😜
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Bahaha! Variety is the spice of life they say, so heavy metal and poetry should be a fun combination, grin!
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Oh, here comes that other side of Ryan!
Beautiful kingdom promised. There were so many images in my head as I read this. Atlantis, the end of seasons, the idea of departing from light into darkness of cessation. It also made me think of the myth of Persephone’s love and abduction.
I can hear the wind echo. Gorgeous work Mr. Stone!
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I’ve been waiting to hear your thoughts, Dajena. Thank you so much. I thought I’d try and step my writing into the light for a bit. Happy it came out alright 😌
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😀 definitely needs an Encore! 🙂
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Hmmm…I’d need a collaborator….😏
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Oh oh! Pick me! pick me 😉
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Great idea 😉
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Phew….
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Damn you Ryan for raising my expectations…and it’s not as if I’m not fussy enough already. This is too beautiful and sweet by half, you’ve raised the bar my friend 🙂
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Nathalie, you are far too kind…but I’m not complaining one bit! Thank you so much, I’m so happy to hear you liked it 😌
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Nice, one. well written 🙂
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Thank you, Mandi 🙂
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Beautiful imagery. I felt like I was there with you, safe and sound even amidst the devil winds.
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Perfect response – just what I was after. Thank you, Emily 🙂
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Ryan, “Rhyme of the Kingdom” didn’t just roll onto the paper, it’s apparent a lot of thought and consideration went into each word. You’ve created so many stunning images and analogies. I really like the idea of the narrator making a promise to never “let go”, regardless of the challenges ahead. So many amazing and suggestive visuals penned, heaven and hell, light and dark, wings and halos. Wonderful use of the phrase “urban malaise”, which for me acts as a bridge connecting the beautiful storytelling with reality, bringing about the idea of going back home, “the light we once made”, taking the chance/opportunity to find the way, tackling hurdles, but most of all to just give it a go. Beautiful poem, lovely rhythm and flow, the writing is superb! Please have a wonderful day. ~ Mia
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Mia, it is the nicest of compliments to receive feedback on this level, from someone who has invested the time and thought to read, ponder and understand my writing so deeply. I am so grateful, truly flattered and incredibly happy that you were able to connect with so many elements. You’ve blown me away. Thank you doesn’t even cut it.
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Ryan, you’re most welcome. It’s truly my pleasure to enjoy your writing. ~ Mia
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😀
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Amazing, Ryan! 🙂 What an ode to freedom!
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Joci!!!
I’m so happy to see you back. I visited your site the other day and saw you’d been a little quiet. I hope you’ve been well. Thank you for dropping by and for your feedback 🙂
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Hi, Ryan! yes, that is true… I have to recover my voice… once I am back home 😉 I’ll always drop by! 🙂 Take care, Joci.
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You too, my friend.
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‘We must take wing, for a Devils wind blows,’ ‘I can play you the rhymes of the kingdom.’ Oh Ryan, you know I love this right? I’m lost for words, hmm doesn’t happen often. But wow, just wow!
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Haha, nice one! Thanks, Jen 🙂
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I loved it!
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I did think it might be your kind of poem. Thank you so much 🙂
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Yep defiantly my kind of poem. Beautiful, romantic, captivating.
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This is all any of us can promise because we never know if we will make it to that ocean. Stunning write, Ryan!
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Perfectly said, my friend. Thank you for your praise 🙂
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Aww this made me so nostalgic. Second time im reading this and my heart still goes plop!! Falling hard here in this one, Ryan. So glad you reposted.
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Thank you for reading it a second time around, it’s truly appreciated my friend 🙂
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This sounds so beautiful, I want to come along too! 🙂
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Thank you, Judy. The more the merrier 🙂
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I’ve no more words, than what’s already been said, I’m truly in awe of your amazing poetry. but I’m not getting in the queue to hold your hand …
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Haha, love it! Thanks again for your kind words, Ivor. As for holding hands…I completely understand 🙂
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Bravo!
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Why thank you 🙂
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🙂
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Oh my! Aren’t we all looking for someone who won’t ever let go? Beautiful. Beautiful.
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The purpose behind it all, I believe… Thank you once more for your thoughtful feedback, Asha 🙂
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Agree and often it’s underrated.
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So dreamy and beautiful, Ryan.
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Hey there! Thank you 🙂 Something a bit lighter. Happy Easter to you
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You’re welcome, Ryan. It’s so nice to see you! Happy Easter to you too!
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Happy Easter Ryan
“Moon Dreams (a Haiku)” … yet to be posted
Answering the moon
I’m a dreamer of the night
Dark side lullabies
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You too, mate. Lovely haiku!
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Thanks mate
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hopeful and romantic
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😃
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